those three video shows us how rude are factory farm.I was surprised to see those video.they tell us about matrix.in factory farm they put a lot of animal together,if they are sick, they just cut their body. its relay rude to them.factory farm is an unhealthy please ,but we get our most of eggs ,milk, meet,cheese from factory farm.In family farm is small and slow because they grows everything natural,on the other hand factory farm is express.they put in their animals body something extra things to grow up early and get lots of milk.
Before i watched those video i knew how factory farm cut their meet that's why for Muslim people those meet are not legal,because its relay unhealthy and rude to them.so we are always buy meet from family farm.family farm meet test is relay good.
in conclusion i can say that we should have to eat organic food to get healthy life .if we buy organic food so those farm will be grown up.we should have to help them for reduce factory farm.
I agree with what you said.It is so not healthy for families to eat these animals and is cruel.Your summary was good.
ReplyDeleteIn some point I agree with your statement that the factory farm put alot of animal together. And is true that the factory farm is unhealthy. Althought you give an example of factory farm but you have to give more details to support your essay. your gammar was good but you misspell some word. you need to work on claim and evidence.
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ReplyDeleteI think I can guess your point of view about the Meatrix, which I believe you are against for. To make us, the readers, have a severe identification
about your position, you may need a clear these statement. Is usually state in one sentence in the first paragraph. Is no more then saying if you agree with the issue presented or you don't.
I uderstand your view point that you are against of industries and you like fiamily firms. I agree with you but it is almost impossible to stop those industries because they are very popular and people are consuming their products. I thind you should practice some grammer and remember to capitalize the beginnig of the sentences.
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